Andrew and I edited some of his poems to enter them into a SLAM poetry competition at the Queensland State Library in Brisbane where he, Ryan and a friend of ours are going to take part in a poetry seminar on July 29. The poems had to be 160 characters or less in length, so we really had to cut. It took out a lot of his fluff and made them stronger. We even sliced two poems and combined their strongest bits to make a new one.
Sigh. Sometimes I wonder if I am home schooling the right kid!
Poems by Andrew Connor Age 11/ Year 6
Home Schooling Group
(Untitled: from a larger poem called “Love and Hate”)
Make racism, hatred and war
Stay in it's own space.
Let people choose that path;
They cannot change their fate.
Keep to your own side;
Make the world great.
(Lower right. Only boy in that section!) |
Love Not Hate
The Devil chose his fate
Hell drowns in rivers
Full of love from a lake
We live together
Forget about fate
We're here to love
Not to hate
Andrew's sense of humour! |
Principle of Nature
A song of no pence
World full of cries
4 & 8 billion
Left to die
A principle of nature
No living creature can deny
Survival of the fittest
Everything must die
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